Adventures In The Forest

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S.O.S:Use direct speech 5 times in my story

Macca and Lani are best friends. One day they decided to go for a walk in the green lush forest.So that's what they did.

Off they went, down the old dusty lane toward the forest. They look at the sign. It read the words ‘ Warning track not finished ’But Lani  And Macca Didn’t care. So down the gravel path they went. Then they realise...

...THAT they had been walking off track for 20 MINUTES!!!They both looked at each other and whispered ‘’Ho No!’’ “We are lost!” “This is not good!” Macca Cried.

‘’We need help!’’ Explained Lani. ‘’I think I brought my phone?!?’’ Mentioned Macca.’’I will call 111.’’ 2o minutes later their was a huge gust of wind. It seemed like it never stopped.It stopped.They look around and saw a big helicopter. Out climbed a man. He questioned “Do you need rescuing?’’ ‘’Yes!’’ Replied both girls.’’Hop in then!’’shouted the man. ‘’UP UP UP and way!”