Made Of More

Once lived a cloud that was much different from the others in many ways. The cloud showed much Personification, as it helped put out fires by raining. The cloud separated from the other clouds at an early age. It then took off on its journey through the city of wonder. The wind could not demand it, creating a fabulous show for the humans, whirling and swirling about all day. Again the cloud floats off to sea, Up Up Up and Away. It's adventures didn’t stop there.

I like the way that the movie is very detailed. It had a great inspiring back story. I believe that any age could watch short film, from young to old ages. I give this short film a rating of 99/100 because… well… it was amazing! Full of character and freedom. I recommend this to anyone! It was astonishing!

L.G: Use five emotive words

S.O.S:Have a book review that includes the key point in the movie

Taking Flight

Taking flight is a movie about a little boy who has to get dropped off at his grandpa's for the day. He finds the old red cart that his dad used to use and loved when he was a kid. This movie is full of imagination. People who are instreast in action packed short movies will be amazed. Personally  I thought that this movie was a little  boring and for kids of a younger age group. I liked that the cart changed into a boat and then a plane.  This movie is for people around the age of 5-10 year olds, I give this movie a 3-5 because it was a cartoon and it was quite babyish. This movie is not the greatest movie i have ever seen.

Dear Mr Peters,

I am writing to you to recommend that you should have a coalition with labour.

Clean Rivers

Do you want clean rivers? Wouldn’t it just be Amazing! Summer is just around the corner… Nothing like going down to the river and spending quality time with your family!

Helping People On The Street

Labour is lowering the house prices so that young people can afford to buy a house. People on  the street are in desperate need of a home. You can help those people buy having a coalition with labour!

Bill English

National thinks that we need to be more tough on freedom campers?!?!Like really? That's just stupid! I love camping! As you can see a lot of people LOVE camping anywhere they want!

Mr Peters,

I hope you have a coalition with labour because then we can have clean rivers!

L.G: To use punctuation

S.O.S: Use 5 commas in my story

Squash

I am standing on a big white court.It has walls all around, there are two people on the court: Me and Arnakia, 1 ball ,2 rackets. I go to hit the   ball…

...and I miss. My heart sinks, she is ahead of me. “I have to work hard now!’’ I whisper to myself.’’Here we go!’’ “game scores are 2/2, Anaika ball in hand, love all, play,’’yelled the umpire.

‘’Come on Amy!’’ Interrupted Mum.

Arnika is now two points in front of me. I want to get runner up. It’s her serve. Here we go!  I lean in to get the ball.I smack the ball as head as I can.”This ball is my brother I say to myself!’’ I say to myself.

I think about all the training that I have done with Pete.I hit the ball as hard as I can. “smack!’’It hits the wall.Arniakia does not return it. It happened again. I have a big smile on my face. “Good game!”

Squash

I am standing on a big white court.It has walls all around, there are two people on the court: Me and Arnakia, 1 ball ,2 rackets. I go to hit the   ball…

...and I miss. My heart sinks, she is ahead of me. “I have to work hard now!’’ I whisper to myself.’’Here we go!’’ “game scores are 2/2, Anaika ball in hand, love all, play,’’yelled the umpire.

‘’Come on Amy!’’ Interrupted Mum.

Arnika is now two points in front of me. I want to get runner up. It’s her serve. Here we go!  I lean in to get the ball.I smack the ball as head as I can.”This ball is my brother I say to myself!’’ I say to myself.

I think about all the training that I have done with Pete.I hit the ball as hard as I can. “smack!’’It hits the wall.Arniakia does not return it. It happened again. I have a big smile on my face. “Good game!”

Adventures In The Forest

L.G:Use different types of punctuation

S.O.S:Use direct speech 5 times in my story

Macca and Lani are best friends. One day they decided to go for a walk in the green lush forest.So that's what they did.

Off they went, down the old dusty lane toward the forest. They look at the sign. It read the words ‘ Warning track not finished ’But Lani  And Macca Didn’t care. So down the gravel path they went. Then they realise...

...THAT they had been walking off track for 20 MINUTES!!!They both looked at each other and whispered ‘’Ho No!’’ “We are lost!” “This is not good!” Macca Cried.

‘’We need help!’’ Explained Lani. ‘’I think I brought my phone?!?’’ Mentioned Macca.’’I will call 111.’’ 2o minutes later their was a huge gust of wind. It seemed like it never stopped.It stopped.They look around and saw a big helicopter. Out climbed a man. He questioned “Do you need rescuing?’’ ‘’Yes!’’ Replied both girls.’’Hop in then!’’shouted the man. ‘’UP UP UP and way!”

Little miss Dolly

Sat on her trolley

Happily drawing away

Along came an alien

That look australian

And frightened little miss Dolly away