L.G: To use punctuation

S.O.S: Use 5 commas in my story

Squash

I am standing on a big white court.It has walls all around, there are two people on the court: Me and Arnakia, 1 ball ,2 rackets. I go to hit the   ball…

...and I miss. My heart sinks, she is ahead of me. “I have to work hard now!’’ I whisper to myself.’’Here we go!’’ “game scores are 2/2, Anaika ball in hand, love all, play,’’yelled the umpire.

‘’Come on Amy!’’ Interrupted Mum.

Arnika is now two points in front of me. I want to get runner up. It’s her serve. Here we go!  I lean in to get the ball.I smack the ball as head as I can.”This ball is my brother I say to myself!’’ I say to myself.

I think about all the training that I have done with Pete.I hit the ball as hard as I can. “smack!’’It hits the wall.Arniakia does not return it. It happened again. I have a big smile on my face. “Good game!”

Squash

I am standing on a big white court.It has walls all around, there are two people on the court: Me and Arnakia, 1 ball ,2 rackets. I go to hit the   ball…

...and I miss. My heart sinks, she is ahead of me. “I have to work hard now!’’ I whisper to myself.’’Here we go!’’ “game scores are 2/2, Anaika ball in hand, love all, play,’’yelled the umpire.

‘’Come on Amy!’’ Interrupted Mum.

Arnika is now two points in front of me. I want to get runner up. It’s her serve. Here we go!  I lean in to get the ball.I smack the ball as head as I can.”This ball is my brother I say to myself!’’ I say to myself.

I think about all the training that I have done with Pete.I hit the ball as hard as I can. “smack!’’It hits the wall.Arniakia does not return it. It happened again. I have a big smile on my face. “Good game!”

Adventures In The Forest

L.G:Use different types of punctuation

S.O.S:Use direct speech 5 times in my story

Macca and Lani are best friends. One day they decided to go for a walk in the green lush forest.So that's what they did.

Off they went, down the old dusty lane toward the forest. They look at the sign. It read the words ‘ Warning track not finished ’But Lani  And Macca Didn’t care. So down the gravel path they went. Then they realise...

...THAT they had been walking off track for 20 MINUTES!!!They both looked at each other and whispered ‘’Ho No!’’ “We are lost!” “This is not good!” Macca Cried.

‘’We need help!’’ Explained Lani. ‘’I think I brought my phone?!?’’ Mentioned Macca.’’I will call 111.’’ 2o minutes later their was a huge gust of wind. It seemed like it never stopped.It stopped.They look around and saw a big helicopter. Out climbed a man. He questioned “Do you need rescuing?’’ ‘’Yes!’’ Replied both girls.’’Hop in then!’’shouted the man. ‘’UP UP UP and way!”

Little miss Dolly

Sat on her trolley

Happily drawing away

Along came an alien

That look australian

And frightened little miss Dolly away